I am completely revising this story, so if you tried to read it in the past and found it hard going, I hope I've managed to improve it.
I have also posted a slightly revised and more polished further chapter of "Web of Treason"
I would love to know if you think these revised versions are an improvement. the originals can still be found at
I'm also posting my revised stories at Open Scrolls now.I started an account a couple of years ago under the name of Senta and they don't let you change it.I love the star ratings systen there, though very rarely does anyone rate my stories!
They are at