April 25th, 2008

Christmas Cats


I just received a ficlet back from one of my beta readers who pointed out the following howlers.

All the highest ranked lords and ladies were invited and the invasions were gladly accepted.

“I did not recognise the flavour of the soup nor the vegetable you served with the crab,” said the Price of Dol Amroth.

"We decided we liked the rood here after all."

I hope to post the story within a few days minus invasions,prices and roods!