pleasedI thought the task would never be complete!
If any one wants to read it,the new version is at
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2110113/1/
and
http://www.naiceanilme.com/viewstory.php?sid=1265
I only hope I have managed to improve it.I could not simply scrap it as it is essential for understanding my other stories,but the first version was truly die and I blushed to read it!