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Oh Beauty!

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B2MeM Challenge: Beauty
Beauty
"‘For myself,' said Faramir, 'I would see the White Tree in flower again in the courts of the kings, and the Silver Crown return, and Minas Tirith in peace: Minas Anor again as of old, full of light, high and fair, beautiful as a queen among other queens: not a mistress of many slaves, nay, not even a kind mistress of willing slaves. War must be, while we defend our lives against a destroyer who would devour all; but I do not love the bright sword for its sharpness, nor the arrow for its swiftness, nor the warrior for his glory. I love only that which they defend: the city of the Men of Númenor; and I would have her loved for her memory, her ancientry, her beauty, and her present wisdom. Not feared, save as men may fear the dignity of a man, old and wise
Format: ficlet (596 words)
Genre: romance, friendship, biography
Rating: G
Warnings: none
Characters: Faramir.
Pairings: Faramir/Éowyn
Summary: Faramir reflects on beauty.
A/N; This is a somewhat experimental piece. I’ve no idea if it will work or not, but the joy of BTME is trying new ideas. I confess it is inspired by "Das Lied von der Erde" as well as Tolkien. You can hear it here
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kQZ51udFtrg


With thanks to Raksha.

O Schönheit! O ewigen Liebens-, Lebens-trunk'ne Welt! – Das Lied von der Erde.
(O beauty! O world forever drunk in love and beauty.)




B2MeM 2013 Day One--Beauty


B2MeM 2013 Day Two

Beauty. Faramir had always esteemed and loved it. His mother had been so beautiful with her softly flowing hair and gentle smile. Most beautiful of all were her gentle hands adorned with bright rings, and the tender caresses she bestowed upon her son.

He thought his brother’s smile beautiful too and the lively hound pups that played upon the hearth.
His world shattered into ugly shards when his mother’s beauty was forever lost from sight. Faramir believed beauty had fled from the world, though he was too young to put into words what he was feeling.

Beauty gradually returned; little by little in a fair sunset; or some fragment of verse or lore that the growing boy discovered.

His father scorned such sensibility. Sunsets and poetry were for women to admire, or the bards to write about, not for a boy bred and born to be a warrior.

His brother laughed. Boromir had found beauty of his own in the bright sword he was now of sufficient age to wield. He polished it until it shone like a star and boasted how many enemies he would run through with his blade.

Faramir shuddered, envisaging bright blood pouring to the ground and the screams of the wounded and dying.
When his time came to wield weapons, he liked better the bow than the sword. The arrow in flight had a beauty of its own when the bowstring sang to hasten it on its way.

There was no beauty in war, though, only in the land he sought to defend. The fair White City with her walls and battlements, which gleamed like pearl in the setting sun. Ithilien with her riot of lush greens and golds, and heady scents that could intoxicate him with their sweetness.

His fellows spoke of the beautiful girls whose kisses they sought, but Faramir’s heart remained untouched. How could he protect a wife and little ones in a land from which the beauty was draining, hour by hour, day by day, as the enemy drew ever closer?

The world grew dark indeed. Even the sun was blotted out for a time. Boromir had fallen in a far off place. His father’s heart turned to stone. Faramir walked shrouded in deep shadow in a place where beauty was but fragments of memory scattered in the winds.

He was about to depart for that realm far beyond the world where beauty reigned supreme, save that one sought him out and plucked him forth from the darkness.

Fair as one of the Ainur did his rescuer appear. Yet, his true beauty was only revealed in the weary grey eyes that smiled upon Faramir when he could at last gaze upon his rescuer. Those eyes revealed a soul brighter than mithril and more precious by far.

Beauty was revealed again as Faramir’s strength returned, together with his hope. The sad lady of Rohan with her sun bright golden hair and the daisy that defied the poisons of Mordor and grew defiant in the gardens. At last, the Eagle’s wings flashed golden in spring sunlight, bringing tidings of great joy.

Now, Faramir dwells daily in a realm drunk in love and beauty. What greater beauty than fair Éowyn riding to greet him upon her grey mare, or the merry laughter of his children as they look at him with loving eyes?

The King, the lord he loves, is come and the White Tree blooms each year. The land blossoms, each year more fruitful than the last. Beauty is no longer hidden, but present in every blossom and every child that gathers them.

Faramir is well content.

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shirebound
Mar. 3rd, 2013 02:13 am (UTC)
What a lovely story, as Faramir's heart blooms along with the land he loves.
lindahoyland
Mar. 3rd, 2013 02:15 am (UTC)
Thank you so much, I'm pleased you enjoyed this.
rakshathedemon
Mar. 3rd, 2013 02:47 am (UTC)
This is lovely, lyrical and so true when it comes to Faramir; particularly his not finding beauty in war.
lindahoyland
Mar. 3rd, 2013 03:14 am (UTC)
Thank you so much.I'm pleased that you find it true to Faramir.
periantari
Mar. 4th, 2013 05:33 am (UTC)
This is so beautiful!!!!

i love how you made use of the quote and how you showed Faramir through the years of what he thought was beautiful. :)

This is so lyrical and beautiful-- this is my favorite line:

Beauty was revealed again as Faramir’s strength returned, together with his hope. The sad lady of Rohan with her sun bright golden hair and the daisy that defied the poisons of Mordor and grew defiant in the gardens. At last, the Eagle’s wings flashed golden in spring sunlight, bringing tidings of great joy.

Very nice-- i love your description !
lindahoyland
Mar. 5th, 2013 05:24 am (UTC)
Thank you so much.I'm delighted you enjoyed this and where this prompt led me worked for you.
mikononyte
Mar. 4th, 2013 06:55 pm (UTC)
Oh a nice experiment indeed!
Like a flower left too long in the heat or too long without light, Faramir's existence shriveled and nearly died. I really like how you carried the idea of beauty, then fading, then nearly dying only to be given the life giving draught of kingly "beauty" and then lovely beauty. He's found his paradise. :)

Edited to add: There's that scene in the Film where Faramir is riding down the streets of Minas Tirith; he knows he is going to ride to his death. Extended cut had him remark to Gandalf not just about "Where else does my loyalty lie" but that To defend her beauty, her poetry, her art, he would gladly die to defend her. Very very Faramir.

Edited at 2013-03-04 06:57 pm (UTC)
lindahoyland
Mar. 5th, 2013 05:25 am (UTC)
Thank you so much.I'm delighted you felt this was "very Faramir".You sum what I was trying to say perfectly.
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